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Write an Email:语气、结构与示例

Write an Email 给你大约七分钟时间,用一封简短的电子邮件回复一个现实情境。本指南展示如何组织邮件结构、如何为读者选择恰当的语气,并提供两封原创示例邮件及点评,说明它们为何有效。

任务要求

你阅读一个来自学习、工作或日常生活的简短情境,以及你的邮件必须完成的事项列表,通常有三项。典型的列表要求你解释某事、请求某事和建议某事。下面的题目是为本指南以相同风格编写的。

三个因素决定分数:列表上的每一点是否被清晰覆盖、语气是否适合读者、语言是否清晰准确。一封覆盖所有要点的简短邮件胜过一封遗漏要点的长邮件。

示例(英文,与考试中一致)
You are taking a course with Professor Lee. You were sick last week and missed a quiz. Write an email to Professor Lee. In your email: • explain why you missed the quiz • ask whether you can take it at another time • suggest a time when you are available

五部分结构

1. 问候语

写给教授或不熟悉的人用“Dear Professor Lee,”;写给同学或朋友用“Hi Sam,”。

2. 一句说明目的

说明你写信的原因,让读者在了解细节之前就知道邮件是关于什么的。

3. 按要求顺序覆盖要点

每个要点写一个简短段落,按照任务要求的顺序。这让你容易检查是否有遗漏,也方便评分人看到。

4. 下一步

用一句话说明你希望发生什么:回复、会面、决定。

5. 结束语和署名

正式邮件用“Best regards,”或“Kind regards,”;非正式邮件用“Thanks,”或“See you soon,”,然后写上你的名字。

示例1:写给教授的邮件

这封回复上面题目的邮件约120词。注意三个要求点如何各自成段,以及每个请求如何具体:一个理由、一个日期和一个具体的替代方案。

示例(英文,与考试中一致)
Dear Professor Lee, I am writing about the quiz in your Introduction to Economics class last Tuesday, which I missed. Unfortunately, I had a high fever that day and my doctor told me to stay at home. I have a note from the campus health center if you need it. I was wondering whether it would be possible to take the quiz at another time. I have already reviewed the chapters it covered. I am free on Thursday afternoon after 2 p.m. and on Friday morning. If neither time suits you, I would be happy to come whenever is convenient for you. Thank you for your understanding. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Daniel Kim

示例2:写给同学的邮件

并非每封邮件都是正式的。在第二个练习情境中,你学习小组的一位同学询问小组能否在周六见面,你的邮件必须说明你不能来、解释原因,并提出另一种分担工作的方式。

语气友好轻松,但邮件仍然完整、有条理且准确。非正式并不意味着马虎。

示例(英文,与考试中一致)
Hi Sam, Thanks for organising Saturday's meeting. I'm really sorry, but I can't make it this time. My cousin is getting married that weekend, and I'll be out of town from Friday evening until Sunday night. I don't want to leave you all with extra work, though. How about I finish my part of the slides by Friday afternoon and share them in our group folder? Then you can add comments during the meeting, and I'll make the changes on Sunday night. Let me know if that works for everyone. Thanks, Mia

选择恰当的语气

在写问候语之前,根据读者是谁以及你要请求什么来决定语气。然后从头到尾保持一致。

教授、经理、公司、官方

使用完整句子,不用俚语,礼貌请求:“Would it be possible to...”、“I would be grateful if...”。在最正式的场合避免缩略形式,不过少数几个可以接受。

稍微认识的人

礼貌但直接:“Could you...”、“I was wondering if...”。可以使用缩略形式。

朋友或同学

轻松温暖:“Hi”、“Thanks so much”、“No worries”。仍然要避免短信拼写,如“u”或“thx”。

节省时间的短语

这个任务中反复出现相同的功能:道歉、解释、请求、建议、感谢。为每个功能准备一两个短语,可以让你把七分钟花在内容上。

示例(英文,与考试中一致)
Purpose: "I am writing to ask about …" · "I'm writing because …" Apologising: "I am sorry for any inconvenience." · "Sorry I couldn't make it." Explaining: "Unfortunately, …" · "The reason is that …" Asking politely: "Would it be possible to …?" · "I was wondering whether …" · "Could you let me know …?" Suggesting: "Would Thursday afternoon suit you?" · "How about …?" · "One option might be to …" Closing: "Thank you for your help." · "I look forward to hearing from you." · "Let me know what you think."

利用好七分钟

一个现实的计划:大约一分钟阅读情境并记下要求点,四到五分钟写作,一分钟对照列表检查邮件并改正你能看到的错误。

不要先写草稿再抄写。没有时间那样做。直接按任务顺序写,句子保持简单,以便你能快速且正确地写出来。

如何练习

每天写一封限时邮件,交替练习正式和非正式读者。每写完后,对照你的文本检查三个要点,并重写任何模糊的请求。你可以在免费的 Write an Email 练习页面尝试真实格式的题目,并在完整模考中获得评分反馈。

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